Blood Dripping

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    Blood Dripping

    Blood Dripping
    She is done thinking about it
    Now shes watching all the blood drip
    Cuttin even deeper into her skin
    Not ever wanting it to stop
    Until she sees the last drop
    Looking down at all the blood
    That is  covering every inch of her body
    Happy to know there is sumthing she can control
    Instead of all the  pain others cause
    Getting weaker and weaker every minute
    Laying on the cold floor not able to stand
    Listening to the sound of all the blood dripping out
    Just wanting for it to all end
    Everythang in front of her goes all dark
    All the sound around her just disappears
    Now the blood is all drained from her body
           There is nothing anybody can do now

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    boomboom56 commented on Blood Dripping

    09-20-2009

    Sad stuff. For this to happen to a human being, which it does, is terrible in it self. You did bring suicide to the front in this piece.

    Southerntdgurl

    09/26/2009

    thank u

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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