Break the Cycle

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    Break the Cycle

    Life is never easy,
    mistakes will be made.
    But it's the long waiting,
    that drives me insane.
    I site here wide awake,
    waiting for the call.
    But when the phone doesnt ring,
    I hang my head and bawl.
    I feel like time is slipping,
    and there's so much more to say.
    I don't want to be alone anymore,
    release me from my pain.
    I cherish every moment that you spend with me,
    but you don't seem to realize that you is all i need.
    Break the cycle of the tears, please stay by my side,
    you are all i ever wanted my soulmate and my guide.

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    Rygar commented on Break the Cycle

    01-18-2010

    a sense of longing emanates from this one, the only thing i noticed was the line "but you don't seem to realize that that you is all i need." it seems there is an extra "that" in there. nice job.

    Redrose77

    02/06/2010

    i finally fixed the line u were talking about. Thanks:)

    samuelj commented on Break the Cycle

    09-29-2009

    I know the feeling of wanting the comfort of another....needing someone is so mindboggling but I feel your pain of wanting...another touch is such comfort in time of need

    Redrose77

    10/01/2009

    Thank you so much for the feedback. Glad you understand

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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