broken heart

5 Comments

Tags:
  • Lost Love

    broken heart

     i cant escape my thoughts at night
    they haunt me with memories
    memories i wish didnt have to end.
    Never want you to fade away.
    From my mind or from my heart.
    i wish you were here to hold my hand,
    but you cant break my heart then fix it.
    I sew the pieces together,
    but they dont fit the way the use to.
    Like a messed up jigsaw puzzle
    I’m confused and out of place.
    Not fitting anywhere
    just existing, just living for anything.
    Anything I can find to hold onto.
    hoping i dont lose my grip.
    afraid ill break down again.
    im trying to stay strong
    but i start to feel happy then something goes wrong.
    Wishing is pretty useless
    They’re no stars fallin’ now.
    Wanting arms around me,
    But it’s just air is all around.
    but i guess i deserve it by how much i hurt you.
    even if i dont mean to.
    I always say the wrong thing,
    and mess up some how.
    Sorry I can’t be amazing,
    Because you don’t deserve anything less.

    Poem Comments

    (5)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on broken heart

    01-03-2011

    I love the honesty in your tone and words. It takes a lot of courage to accept responsibility and own up to one's part in the breakdown in a relationship. People who are meant to be in your life will be and people who aren't will be a remembered lesson that never has to be repeated again. Excellent write. My wish and hope for you is that your broken heart will heal and find someone who will help you to see and feel..................E
    Reply to Comment

    Rhymer commented on broken heart

    12-29-2010

    Excellent, but very sad piece full of vivid emotion....10 from me.
    Reply to Comment

    freemansvoice commented on broken heart

    12-29-2010

    I wish someday all of those fish in the sea would come ashore. There are a lot of hungry hearts out there. Never give up hope. You can always hold on to it. liked the poem. now write something happy. you can start with HAPPY NEW YEAR
    Reply to Comment

    BrokenHeart2009 commented on broken heart

    12-29-2010

    This poem is full of you owning up to how you feel; what went wrong. This poem takes courage and strength, and you have both. It was a meaningful poem and that says a lot:)
    Reply to Comment

    angelchaser commented on broken heart

    12-29-2010

    this is beautiful, honey. don't ever doubt the poet that's within you.
    Reply to Comment

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

    BlissfullTerror’s Poems (10)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Time Mends 0 01/11/2011
    Chained Heart 0 01/11/2011
    Forgotten Memory 1 01/05/2011
    Thats Life 1 01/05/2011
    Puzzeled 1 01/05/2011
    Falling tears 1 01/05/2011
    Luke Balint 1 01/03/2011
    you dont matter 2 01/02/2011
    Mr. Right 1 01/02/2011
    broken heart 5 12/29/2010
    Top of Page