broken

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  • kutiespie
  • i love love but love seem not to love me so why is it we chase for something that we can never grasp

Poem Commentary

it a very well thought prospective what i see in myself and how my life is

broken

i,m afraid of being hurt agian
to feel the pain i always feel
beacuse i'm me that who i'm always going to be is me
for a fact you don't like me beacuse im a rag doll with black hair and brown eyes sexy combnation  right but im still broken
with two working legs and bretheing lungs but i wonder what ive done
to make me this sad i am broken
arent you glad  see my tears and my fear beacuse i am broken
but i  can fly without another person to steer
beacuse i am broken

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jamie7121f commented on broken

12-15-2010

Hmm. I see this poem with potential, but it would be more enticing to read if the grammar and punctuation was revised. I like it though. :)

Desmeii commented on broken

12-15-2010

Hi kutiespie once again I enjoyed your poetry,well done.They're short but who said good poetry is long cos it isn't.You're straight to the point & I really like it,keep writing...peace,Shirl

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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