Can I be apart of your ocean?

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    Original poetry inspired by a love that was quite forbidden in 1992.

    Can I be apart of your ocean?

     The way u move oh so smooth u turn me on when in motion ur body glides jus like a wave, can i be apart of ur ocean?
     Ur love has a magical rise for love u have the potion, ur aquatic presence flowing thru my soul, can i be apart of ur ocean?
     The moon reflects off ur misty waters stirring my emotions drowning me in ur quaint seduction, can i be apart of ur ocean?

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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