Cherish the Grain

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This poem was inspired from my time living in Jakarta, Indonesia, where it was too easy to watch others suffer without acting. The glass with which I surrounded myself (apathy) came from a grain of sand (a need for security), which must be cherished and shared, not selfishly stored, if we want to make the World a better place.

Cherish the Grain

 

A World burnt in terror and trial

Blurs by at arms length – a touch away

But for the hard shining glass

That castrates me and banishes it.

 

Steady air and light dialed to my liking;

Windows polished and locked as tires turn

Into the chaos that cries for me,

But echoes bounce off the blown wall.

 

A beckoning World pleads, pounds

The looking glass: a weak, indifferent

Barricade that budges not from 

Clawing cries and searing tears.

 

Aid shatters shiny apathy  

As the grain of sand with which

I saw the worried World

Destroys its translucent child.

 

 

 



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windsongs commented on Cherish the Grain

07-17-2013

the beach boys:)

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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