Circles (I)

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    Circles (I)

     In the morning in the sky
    Another reason to cry
    From the unadulterated eye
    I
    Sense the mist and the fog
    Through the undercurrent of sunlight is another bog
    Monday morning in the wake of mourning
    After the tragedies of yesterday can't face the pain of tomorrow
    The sorrow
    Circles of life and grief
    Slink into your mind like a thief
    And you bare it through gritted teeth
    What would Jesus do? if only he was you

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    FranzJ commented on Circles (I)

    11-25-2009

    it does seem like life is a drag - day after day - nice
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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