Come Hit Me Up

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  • Blove420
  • feelin like a bird in da sky flyin so high dat i cnt leave da sky

Come Hit Me Up

Come hit me up, but just dont tease me. Your love is what I'm fein-n- 4, with your soft sweet touch(sst). As I run my fingers through ure silkie soft hair(ssh). Kissin your neck so softly, making you want me. I think about it. "If I should, or should't" give it 2 you. As I look at your face it calls my name, but I never want 2 put you in pain. I never want 2 make you feel left out, so thatz why I call you up, so we can hang-out. Your hands rubbing on me, a soft kiss will say everything. Hours later we're still doing our thing. Please don't run away, cuz ma love nothing will be the same. All I ask 4 if, we keep it real with each other, so hit me up when your ready 2 spill. They call me the doctor I'll come-n- bundle you up. It aint all about the fuck, so girl if you've got something on your mind, U need 2 let me know whats-up. So come hit me up, but don't take all day, my love I can't wait.

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MsKrystle commented on Come Hit Me Up

06-22-2009

Yeah this does almost sound like a song..... I liked it...Its good to know that a guy wants to listen vs. just f*ck. Nice work

kym commented on Come Hit Me Up

05-21-2009

that is a very true and honest poem i really like you and how you see things i can not stress that to you enough on how important it is espscially you as a male which makes you ten times more attractive than any other man

Blove420

05/27/2009

awww thxs hun. I hope I can read some of ur poems as well. I would luv it very much. Holla @ ya later

loveangel4life commented on Come Hit Me Up

05-21-2009

-Wow, that was really cute. i guess this poem is from experience aye? Sounds almost like an R&B song.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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