Consumed

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Consumed

When I look at you do you see the fire in my eyes?

It will never go away, even when I cry.

The love I have for you is so bold and strong; I have enough to last you your whole life long.

That's why I make this promise today to fulfill your every desire;

So that when we are old and grey we can say we were consumed by the fire.

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CasimirJash commented on Consumed

09-23-2009

wow incredible poem, love desire put in a small way., simple but charming. I like the metaphor, "fire in the eyes? will never go away, even when I cry" great poem

Amethyst1980

09/26/2009

Thank you so much.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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