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    I promise to only cut once and to try not to cut real deep. the only problem with that is I have lost all knowledge of what deep is. I don't know this anymore cause I don't feel anything. I'm done with living! Please kill me or give me the strength to do it myself.

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    cmlestrade commented on Cut

    08-17-2009

    I hope, actually I pray that you are taking artistic license and your poems do not reflect the truth. The theme of all three of your submissions seems to be desperation, abuse, loneliness and resignation to a situation I can't imagine. They come across more as pleadings for help and understanding. Like I said I hope you have taken artistic license in which case you're brilliant, if not and this is all a reflection of your life please know that I will be praying for you day and night. God does not make trash. You are not trash that is unworthy to live or suffer abuse. You are his beautiful creation and he loves you. A lot of us Chritians believe that if you and no one else around you can solve it to turn it over to God. What can that hurt? It hasn't been working so far so just give it to him. he is the great problem solver.Give him your problems, every single one of them and try to get on with your life as best you can and at least remember someone who doesn't even know you will take time out of their busy day tp pray for you as many times as they think anout you just because you are a child of God. Be Blessed
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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