Day by Day

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    this is one of my older pieces

    Day by Day

    Day by day it grows...emotions swirling, spinning, spiraling, going completely out of control, covering me in a quilt of confusion, dark surrounds me as confusion blocks the light.

    day by day it grows... can't think clearly anymore, cant figure things out in my head, what is going on in my head? so many questions... unanswered.

    day by day it grows, can't scream, can't cry, can't think, the words are jumbled... a mess in my head, the emotions are all screwed up....

    day by day the confusion grows.

     it eats at me, tearing me apart inside, the confusion needs to stop, the emotions need to stop drowning me, they dont though, because day by day it grows, and as it does so does the darkness surrounding me....

    day by day it grows, soon there will be no light left, i have to figure it out, to save myself, before the confusin and its darkness consume me entirely, because day by day it grows....

    day by day the confusion grows...

    day by day it grows.

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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