d.e.a.t.h

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    d.e.a.t.h
    some actions are not respectable
    usually because it's a "sin"
    in life, you have to decide,
    can i deal with them or just give in?
    isn't it up to you, whether to live or die?
    don't leave it to "God'
    either you decide or some other guy.



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    WordSlinger commented on d.e.a.t.h

    07-26-2009

    The last part of the last line, can be very true. that's why decisions are crucial, never let a human run your life. And God shall add if you ask.
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    ccslim commented on d.e.a.t.h

    07-25-2009

    True that! Drive life or it drives you! Good touch in flow but my heart ached for another stanza!
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    dallas120256 commented on d.e.a.t.h

    07-05-2009

    Im new to this site. read through some poems and what I felt from the three poems I read of yours was a refreshing natural spontaneity.......a uniqueness of words that put it all together.....they were good!
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