Down into the blue

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Down into the blue

Down into the blue
From the color of the roses
To the color of your hair
From the sound of the soul music
To the sound of your voice
From the dream to the moon
To the sparkling eyes of yours
You hypnotize me with the lock of love but you holding the knife of rejection right next to my heart
I'm not a tall guy
I'm an average
I'm not a curly hair guy
I'm not a light skinned boy
I'm an uneducated guy
I'm not a musician type
I'm not Denzel Washington look alike I'm no scientist
Maybe!!! that's why you're always rejected me
That's why you ignored me so many time The truth is now I'm tired, I'm a good caring hearted man
No matter what I do I can't get your attention
I'm going to look in the sky, in go over the edge and take a deep dive in to the blue Where all those beautiful pink fishes at Where I would listen to the dolphin heart only
Where only the sharks going to be mad at me
Where the sun does have to set or rise again
Down into the blue

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Down into the blue

01-11-2011

I like how you play the emotions out in your poems, and how you make the character in the poem an average guy. I like how this average guy just can't get the girl bc that is real life:)

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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