Dream

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    Dream

    On this desserted island
    it's like i saw you in a dream
    guess i was visioning you and me
    you held my hand as we walked through the darked sand
    and seem to vision you as my man
    guess in this dream you completed me
    you touched me in the most deepest ways
    then when I look in your eyes
    my mind starts to gaze
    you touch my face
    and it was like you were my ace
    so when I close my eyes
    it's like you have me hypotized
    so what do you see when you close your eyes
    I bet you think it is an amazing surprise
    so when you close your eyes imagine me
    leaping to you across any blue sea
    and in this dream
    I see the whole world
    and I was your special girl
    so when you dream think of me
    it hot and your hot but guess what
    our bodies are not
    dreams seem to come and go
    but this is one dream that you will always know

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    arfin09 commented on Dream

    02-28-2009

    very nice. I didn't even mind the rhyming in the 2nd 1/2. keep it goin'

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