~Drowning~

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    ~Drowning~

    Drowning in a sea of rage i taste the embrace,
    helpless as it steals my soul, and somehow i
    have lost all control.
    Sitting here crying and my room filling up,
    I'm dying. Hopelessly trying to reach the top,
    but something ends up pulling me back to
    the bottom. Looking up from down below i see
    a ray of light shinning so bright, someone calling
    my name, but farther and farther away.
    And I know I'm loosing most of my days.
    Thinking of all the lost's and gains in my life
    with it flashing before my eyes.
    All of a sudden I'm not afraid,
    with my hand held up high reaching,
    I slowly let go of everything i was holding.
    My eyes close slowly, The sound of
    darkness and silence overcomes my ears,
    with a single, last tear running down my face,
    I know i am drowning!

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    nikkishaniqwa commented on ~Drowning~

    03-16-2009

    very nice coco!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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