ELUDING STORIES

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    ELUDING STORIES

    The stories of the past, wounding up so hard,
    Away in cast of a star, colouring of curd.
    A pale glint it threw;
    Though the string is hew.
    Drifting amidst the space and my dreams.
    With both the endways cul-de-sac in dreams.
    The space is aloof, out of reach:
    Happy silvery spot still shining in dark.
    Each juncture etiolating lesser, neither can I hark
    The symphony of plethora patience and love,
    Nor the panorama of that path's curve.
    A story to survive my breath, my yearnings,
    my modesty, my belief in sacrificing;
    Is struggling between life and death.

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    jellian commented on ELUDING STORIES

    09-18-2010

    very fine writing and a very impressive title ....and a touching poetry.....

    phatdaddee commented on ELUDING STORIES

    09-17-2010

    Great wordplay! I really enjoyed this poem it really spoke to my poetic side.

    bonny

    09/18/2010

    Thank you a great deal.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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