Exsisting

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    Exsisting

    Destracted and distant, she sits alone.
    Anixious to know what life has to hold.
    Not wanting to look back at days gone by.
    Imagining someone else's life and trying not to cry.
    Every step she takes seems to push her two steps back.
    Love seems so far away that she'll never get it back.
    Longing for love, but scared of what awaits.
    Every moment that passes brings her closer to her fate.

    Not knowing what's to come makes her scared to even breathe.
    If only she could live life without feeling the need to leave.
    Cause for sorrow lingers over her head.
    Only she can pull herself from the shadows of the dead.
    Life seems so hard to even live at times.
    Exsisting in life is what she makes it in her mind.


    By: Danielle

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    chadallac74 commented on Exsisting

    02-26-2009

    That was a beautiful poem. The imagery here was amazing. Keep up the good work. You are a great visual artist.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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