Extraordinary

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  • Devotion

    Extraordinary
    as the bubble of your joy
    expanding in rings

    between observation
    and recording

    rules that govern parallel things

    ulraviolet universe
    rays of god and queen
    yellow gold energy

    emerging

    interference creates new
    possibilities cultivating
    gardens in the mind

    running along fire streets
    two beings crash and meet

    still active
    making things
    drifting in one sea

    of blissful imaginings.

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    abbadejuju commented on Extraordinary

    04-23-2009

    might you've mispelled "ultraviolet". otherwise excellent word play creating vivid images. well done!
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    HarverTomsson commented on Extraordinary

    04-16-2009

    I just love your individualistic sytle! I am six playing connect the dots all over again, and it is glorious.
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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