Fading Love

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"You'll never feel what love means, before your heart is broken." -Giegielove Goddess Poet-

Fading Love

Fading Love by Giegielove Goddess Poet

The love is slowly rotten-
You love me before
I know how you honored me
I know how you adored me
I know how you like me
You take my breath away
As you hold my body.

As you kiss me and whispers all those sweet words in my ears
You said you are with me ,you will always there for me
I have nothing to be fear..

Let share our thoughts and fatasies together
And whatever and what crosses your way
I'll be the one with a special place in your heart.

I'm so glad that you are there by my side
I shouted for happiness, and my tears suddenly falls that i can't hide.

But now every sweet word are blewn by the hates
And our love is gone
I think...to be together forever is not our fate.

Now we both know which mistakes we do
And our love it's like a waste to be throw!

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gallaxy commented on Fading Love

11-29-2010

Another lovely piece of work I must say. true love takes time. Unlike what others might say, I dont beleive in "Love at first sight". I believe in the possibilities it may be there when you meet someone (hopefully). Take your time , a good time for development and if there is a wolf or wolforine under that sheep skin, they will show you their true selve and you will be spared..

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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