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Improvement

01-21-2014 at 09:25:47 AM

Improvement

Hi,

Please do read my poem, comment and rate so that I can improve smile

http://www.originalpoetry.com/home/poems/view/title/the-last-petal_2

Last edited by anniebloom 01-21-2014 at 09:30:33 AM

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.