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Improvement

01-21-2014 at 09:25:47 AM

Improvement

Hi,

Please do read my poem, comment and rate so that I can improve smile

http://www.originalpoetry.com/home/poems/view/title/the-last-petal_2

Last edited by anniebloom 01-21-2014 at 09:30:33 AM

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.