G.I. Blues

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  • Devotion

    G.I. Blues

    (For Darlene and Dan)
    Oh dearest one, you're far away
    The light fades from my eyes
    I felt a lump inside my heart
    When we said our good-byes.

    I saw my life in colors with you
    Just the other day
    But now you're gone and all I see
    Are dimmer shades of gray.

    I understand that you must go
    And painfully I wait
    And one day soon, when you return
    We'll never separate.

    Until that day, I will hold dear
    The times we've spent together
    And patiently await the day
    I'll be with you forever.

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    Artie commented on G.I. Blues

    08-21-2009

    Very nicely written. I know this feeling. Many of my friends are in this same situation. 10 from me.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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