Goodbye,the saddest word to say.

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    The poem was for a leaving love of my life.it was hard to say goodbye,but was better expressed on lines.GOOD IS THE SADDEST WORD TO SAY.Hope you enjoy it.

    Goodbye,the saddest word to say.

    This feeling i cannot comprehend
    this heart i cannot betray
    this excruciating thoughts,
    derails the man in me.
    difficult to pronounce,
    hard to say,but true at heart.
    Good bye,the saddest word  to say.

    The day struck like a match-stick light,
    unveiling the darkness of the night.
    the moon withholds
    its shadow's light.
    but your word echoes
    with ultimum  might.
    creating a vacuum
    in the height of the heart,
    Goodbye,the saddest word to say.

    Wishy-washy was my heart
    when your words winked wildly.
    my tears was invigorated,
    causing invasive erosion
    on my dark whitish face.
    the ark of love was broken
    to love again yet unknown.
    in tumor my hear lives,
    Goodbye,the saddest word to say.

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    cmlestrade commented on Goodbye,the saddest word to say.

    10-29-2009

    Very very good. Nice rhythm accompanied by an excellent word choice. Good emotional pull. A very good read, thank you.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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