Haunting My Thoughts

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    Haunting My Thoughts

    We look through galss veils and see this girl happy.
    Always smiling, Always laughing.
    What a wonder she is. To hide so easily.

    Take veils of glass off.. Stare deep into pools of brown.
    You see some saddness. Some doubt.
    However this girl is magnificent. On every count.

    I see a radiant smile that lights up a room. A beautiful
    personality that lifts those around her
    to new heights.

    As she rests her head on my shoulder
    I think how comfortable it is
    As I run my fingers through her hair.
    I want to see her true smile.
    And what a brillant sight it is!

    I turn to look. I have to see her face.
    When I do I smile. i feel like I'm
    looking at an angel. So perfect
    So bright. I lean in to kiss...

    Unfortunetly I wake...

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    Ravoya commented on Haunting My Thoughts

    12-17-2009

    i like the idea but i think the structure needs some work, overall a good poem tho

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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