Hero

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    Hero

     Have you ever seen a hero die?

    Lying awake, thinking, half dreaming
    Paralized by silent thounder and lightning

    ever seen a childs eyes when a hero dies?

    It's like the sun setting in the morning
    you see pain and brutal understaning

    Lost in a moment in time
    lost when my hero died

    I had no one to catch me
    my world turned upside down

    once I felt peace,
    now as I fall from the sky
    to this great earth I relize
    this is what it feels like when a hero dies

    Hero truned Villian by whos hand I don't know
    my heart stopped frozen the day my hero died

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    Teardrops commented on Hero

    12-16-2009

    i am so sorry your hero died my did he was my dad loved the poem
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    TheFallen

    12/17/2009

    Thank you for reading my Work.

    icu2 commented on Hero

    12-15-2009

    I felt the same way....Good poem. TEN
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    TheFallen

    12/15/2009

    Thank you so much. :)

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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