How I'm feelin' copyright (c) 2010

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How I'm feelin' copyright (c) 2010

To understand my thoughts, you have to understand my feelings. I'm going to spit what's on my mind so you know how I feel. The obstacles are challenging but the journey is surreal. I think I'm on top of the world, but some people think I'm on the bottom since I didn't resort to drug dealing. Where I'm from people lie, cheat and kill. I just decided to steal knowledge while going to college. I didn't hold the steel, I just stayed in school to eat free meals. Speaking like a hater when you really envy my path with a passion. No lights, no camera, I decided to make school happen. Society rather hear about me clapping then to hear me rapping. I don't need to clap anybody just applauded my film when I say lights, camera, action. Didn't deal drugs because my floor was unlimited and my ceiling had a cap. I'm kicking words off the top of my fitted hat, poetically exceeding the knowledge salary cap. Now my floor is my feet and my ceiling is uncapped. Yall went right and I went left, crime doesn't pay. I get refunds and yall paying the luxury tax.

Yall went with the crowd and I chose to be me.Stop being mad because I'm free since I decided to do me. You're free on the earth but enslaved mentally. Unwillingness to gain knowledge is causing social stupidity. Come on people yall neglect is hurting me so I know its murdering you. Too many black clouds over people, change to a pastel or a lighter hue. Taste my words since I'm champagnin', no political agenda I'm just knowledge campaignin'. I don't knock the hustle just remember you can hustle legally dude. Work the hustle don't let hustle work you. FUNKY!!!!

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mdpoetgirl commented on How I'm feelin' copyright (c) 2010

07-08-2010

Cool poem, mrletsfit... loved the part about your ceiling having no limit and your ceiling having a cap, then your feet becoming your floor... this definitely sounds like a rap song. Good work ;-)

mrletsfitit

07/10/2010

Awwww thanks. yea i had to express my feelings. ummm yea i listen to a lot music. thanks again.

soulartfilms commented on How I'm feelin' copyright (c) 2010

07-05-2010

Very positive and uplifting- the first two lines are my favorite ;)

mrletsfitit

07/05/2010

Cooo Cooo. Thanks. Just spitting some knowledge

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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