hung ghost

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hung ghost

Love lost, black ghost,
In the dark, sorrow and pain
Tear blood in to jealous.
Oh deaths come and take me away.
Scream with range of hopeless.
Spider’s crow, suicide in tree and here no one scream.
Hell is a mirror that trapped the soul.
Hung ghost death swallow in hoe.
Street can gain fear of death,
That plays Fears in the mad. Depression poisons the mad.
Hung and depressing weaken up
Black roses, those become pain
Emotion, cry and broken. Blood in my hand
Def written inspiration cliff my eyes
Blood stone to strong wife.
A tall tales that have be told about the victim.
Hung in the house to death.
Oh ghost story is told to the child.
Trapped in my own mad. Trapped in the dark I can’t see the light
Love lost, black ghost. I feel like die.
Def does not understand when you can’t feel you self breath,
I try to survival the loneliness.
Love lost, black ghost.
I am not afraid of death.
They say death is a window.
Suicide is alls in my mad, some time I feel like kill myself.
Love lost, black ghost.

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torimode commented on hung ghost

08-28-2009

What a sad and gripping poem with wonderful imagery. Wonderful poem!

optimistic commented on hung ghost

06-29-2009

Wow this poetry piece has a lot of imagery in it, you have great talent inside you write some deep things that go beyond imagination, hold on the feeling of suicide hits a lot of people just hold on to God and pray for change grab support, I believe in you cause I read this piece now believe in self and keep writing to make self understand.

LadyLuck commented on hung ghost

06-29-2009

this poem is so sad and just radiates pain and numbness. keep up the good work

connsk8 commented on hung ghost

06-01-2009

I was just in the chat room (the ol dlady) and promised I would read all you young people's work, I liked this best of all of yours, it seems you took your comment's advice, this is cleaned up with so much feeling, as well as your other work but nothing gets in the way of this one flowing...you very well may be the "best poet" in the room!!! Excellent job, thank you for sharing, have faith, you are young and have the rest of your life ahead of you!!!

ladyd37 commented on hung ghost

05-27-2009

this is a very powerful poem!! I hope u don't eva think bout killing urself 4real!! Just poetry rite?? cuz I know we I get down at times but know God is on my side!!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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