I gave it all
I gave it allI couldn't help
But to fall for you
You wiped the tears
Right off my face
As you spoke those words
You always know
Just what to say
I thought that you
Really did
Love me
I gave it all
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Tags: Love
- deathkid
- death is easy and peaceful life is harder........ make mistakes and learn from them but don't get yourself killed in the process....- katie marie :)
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jam4muzic commented on I gave it all
06-12-2013
- Wow, very simple. I think you can expand a lot with this idea because it shows heartbreak quite easily and how there is regret. Why not add in details about what happened, or just personify the feeling more?
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