I Love You Under a Rainbow

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    I Love You Under a Rainbow
    My love is never fading, even as the years come and go
    When I called to say I Love You , I was standing under a rainbow
    The skies were grey and it was raining all around
    A beam of light revieled something so profound
    The colors were bright , such a beautiful site to see
    In that instant I thought of you, I hope you think of me
    After all this time together, I just wanted you to know
    That I love you my dear, I love you under a rainbow

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    Stryx commented on I Love You Under a Rainbow

    10-20-2009

    You have the rhyme, now work on the rhythm. You have a lot of possibility, but you have to work at it. That's callled rewrite.
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    stellar commented on I Love You Under a Rainbow

    10-19-2009

    VEry very romantic....this poem melts my heart..........^_^ v
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    hartpickle10 commented on I Love You Under a Rainbow

    06-30-2009

    wow, that was realy sweet, i was wondering if i could borrow it 4 a song?
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    Johnny

    06/30/2009

    Thanks so very much, and sure, feel free to use it, thats cool.

    tinygirl commented on I Love You Under a Rainbow

    01-12-2009

    very beautiful poem johnny
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    litldeer commented on I Love You Under a Rainbow

    11-18-2008

    I really wanted to change the score on this to a 9, but it wouldn't let me. This is absolutely beautiful. Keep writing
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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