I Want Someone.....

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    I Want Someone.....
    I want someone to fill my needs. Someone Real, Someone Sweet.
    I want someone to Play with My Hair, Not My Heart, and Not Care if
    I Burp or... that I'm Smart! I want him to lick my feet and suck my toes, kiss my cheek and Like my Nose. But Please, No Weirdos!
    I want someone who will Accept Me At All Times, Like My Rhymes,
    and think I'm Cute, and doesn't mind if I sometimes...... Hoot!
    I want someone who will Forgive My Mistakes, someone who Gives More Than He Takes, but will take the Good with the Bad, as Myself,
    and be Glad, or Else, He Could lose the Best Thing He ever Had!
    Leaving Us Both- Lonesome and Sad.

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    PRober commented on I Want Someone.....

    07-05-2009

    very nice! I think alot of us can agree on this one indeed!
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    Rascaleb commented on I Want Someone.....

    06-09-2009

    Yea. An expression of true feelings. This poet has thrown herself fully into this. I like this person.
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    PP commented on I Want Someone.....

    03-31-2009

    'I want him to lick my feet and suck my toes, kiss my cheek and Like my Nose' Are you looking for a pet? A puppy?
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    bevneal commented on I Want Someone.....

    03-30-2009

    I think your writing please read my work and tell me what you think http://www.originalpoetry.com/memories2
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    countrypoet commented on I Want Someone.....

    03-25-2009

    I like this poem very much as it expresses a feeling that I share.I would like to find someone that appreciates me for who I am also.Another well written poem.Keep up the good work.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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