I WAS WRONG & I MISSED.

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    • catboymiau
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    I WAS WRONG & I MISSED.

    Talking with my own self
    still not understanding why,
    beeing such a selfish man
    deer love i let you fly.

    mixed up between 2 loves
    one real & one that wouldnt last long,
    the same & same after time
    made me fall for wich was wrong.

    I decided for who i shouldn't
    for the fiery & passionete love ,
    i prefered only the sex
    that my dear; real love.

    Dumb , but how dumb i was
    what easy comes ,easy goes,
    now I do a reality check
    for being selfish i lost you both.

    On my knees i come back to you
    begging for your forgiveness,
    even if you dont acceptme
    ill give you my dear the reason.

    But please first ask your heart
    & i hope he will answer yes
    if in a remote ,tiny little place
    he still cares about me

    If your hearts answer is NO
    that he has nothing for me
    undersdand allways my love
    that I WAS WRONG & I MISSED.


    bY. Richard L. Simmons Rivera
    Carolina P.R. march 6 2008 9:15 am







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    Dreamer123 commented on I WAS WRONG & I MISSED.

    07-31-2009

    this is great. well done. great job. made me think.thanks for sharing. el isla de encanto! this is great. i love it. God bless you. :) :D

    catboymiau

    08/02/2009

    Tnx God bless U 2. Isla del Encanto yep, Puerto Rico has talent lol gracias por el comment

    Nicko7 commented on I WAS WRONG & I MISSED.

    02-17-2009

    I liked this I also think if you put some beats behind it it would make a great Rap, it scans beautifully Nice Work

    catboymiau

    08/02/2009

    Tnks it was intended to b a reggaeton song in spsnish.. lol

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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