Ibadan!

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Ibadan!

IBADAN
Rust, rusty I saw
What a marveled sight
My eyes alone so surprised
Rust on roofs of ancient boxes
Could those be houses or mere boxes?
As I can perceive from above
Ancient you are
Old, I see has become of your streets
Rusty tops scattered till the end of the earth
Ibadan, how old are you?
A question the colored man fails to respond with a clue
I yet believe you to be older than the mother that bore you
You remind me of colonialism
I can still see foot paths of the past
Now questions I ask myself
Could this be the foot prints of the colorless man?
Who I heard sold my foundation to slavery
I feel sick to think of you that way
Am happy and I start to boast of a concrete evidence
That I have a past I was told about
Rust all along, can I stop seeing you?
Or could this be forever?
Cos you seriously continue to show yourself
From your deliberate reflex ions to my naked eyes
Yes, I can’t help to notice your bronze medals
Even if I want to, can I paint you all to the end?
No, I know not what becomes of our past evidence
Even in your old age
Your bosom can still accommodate the future
Your strong teeth can still chew
Ibadan, with pride I can call you;
Rusty, shinny, bronze medal in the sun!
September, 2003

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Nicko7 commented on Ibadan!

03-07-2009

This is quite thought provoking very well written, Will re read as well I would be giving it a 9 if the rate thing was working Excellent

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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