I'd Rather Die

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    Inspiration: Chris McCall, about moving to Ut.

    I'd Rather Die

    With all that Ive been through,
    I wish you only knew.
    And I fall apart and cry,
    But I'd rather die
    And your name, it shines
    In bright red lines.
    If you look within my mind
    Its all that you will find
    With all that Ive been through,
    I wish you only knew.
    And I fall apart and cry,
    But I'd rather die
    A love so strong
    Yet a love so wrong
    It will end with a broken heart
    But you knew that from the start
    With all that Ive been through,
    I wish you only knew.
    And I fall apart and cry,
    But I'd rather die

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    Paint1954 commented on I'd Rather Die

    10-09-2009

    great wording well spoken for sure and from the heart.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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