They thought we were in Love

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They thought we were in Love

They thought we were in love

Maybe it's the way we smiled at one another
The way the sun would hit your eyes and turn them lighter;
brightening your stature, creating an undeniable glow
Maybe it was the hearty laughs we shared in secret
and whisper them again in the dark
Perhaps it was the way you cast away shadows
with the brightness of your character 
Perhaps it was the way my heart nearly jumped out of me
every time I heard your name; your voice like velvet
It's possible that it was the time we spent away
talking about all the things that mattered most in this life
talking about the next, awaiting plans for our near future 

Yes, they thought we were in love seeing that all the beauty this world pertains was reflected in our souls, in our walk, in our gazes
Nowhere near perfection but still made to belong together

What in the world would make them think that? 

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Helios commented on They thought we were in Love

03-09-2010

Yes, what on earth would make them think that? You cannot stop yourself from falling in love [laugh].

ashren0425

03/09/2010

tell me about it hahah it just sort of happens

kage commented on They thought we were in Love

03-09-2010

This is really great i like it profoundly . some times i try to reach this level but i am an amateur at best you have the knack for this type of poetry ..... very good

ashren0425

03/09/2010

hey thanks :) don't give up though i know a bunch of people might say this but all it takes is practice and before you know it you're there

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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