In U

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    In U

    (testing, testing, is this thing on?)

    In U is where I lose me, In U is where I'm supposed to be.
    In U is where I feel alive, in U is where I want to die.
    I smell your smell, but only I can tell, for it rest on my lips,
    Oh how I wish I could sip, slurp, slop, in U nonstop, until I dead drop, in U is all I got.
    The feeling in U makes me be, all I can be, when I'm in U, I'm not even me.
    I'm a movie star, going for the money shot, I'm the letter X, trying to mark the spot.
    In U lies the treasure, the riches and all the gold, In U lies my heart, until I grow real old.
    In U I get so full even though I've not digested, in U I passed the test, even though I was not tested.
    In U all day, In U I be, In U all night, until I create another ME.

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    JadedJezzabel commented on In U

    05-19-2009

    INTERESTING DESCRIPTION OF MAKING LOVE TO YOUR BELOVED. I LIKE HOW U USED A CAPITAL U FOR REFERING TO HER. IMPRESSIVE.

    optimistic commented on In U

    05-19-2009

    Can't leave them Can't love them Yet there is something about them that keeps us coming back excellent poem

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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