Incredulous

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    Incredulous

    Now that she knows
    You have washed your hands of her
    She sits incredulous
    With soft sad tears brimming her huge brown eyes
    the exact color of yours she says,
    "All I am is 40 dollars he loses every week..."

    I sit incredulous
    Hold her close
    Heal her pain
    Watch her grow

    Now that you know
    She has washed her hands of you
    You sit incredulous
    With soft sad tears brimming your huge brown eyes
    the exact color of hers
    You do not yet realize the depth of your loss...

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    erroneousflint commented on Incredulous

    09-07-2010

    You truly speak to things that matter....Keep it coming """""You do not yet realize the depth of your loss..."""""" This is not fair

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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