Inside A Rainbow

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    Inside A Rainbow

    I wonder what it would be like
    to see a rainbow from inside,
    Would the colors reflect back to me
    or would the colors hide?

    To look out from a rainbow
    would it seem so dark and gray,
    To look at life through the brighter side
    or would the colors fade away?

    Or would things look just as bright
    would there be that pot of gold,
    At the ending of the rainbow
    the way the stories have been told?

    I know we'll never know these things
    for its impossible to see,
    The inside of a rainbow
    unless you see it in your dreams.

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    tierra7 commented on Inside A Rainbow

    11-23-2009

    Bravo !! Bravo ! ! this is such a lovely write...your genuine creativity is filled with such a want... as innocent as a child's curiosity to, explore... find.... and touch...very beautiful........ " I wonder what it would be like to see a rainbow from inside, Would the colors reflect back to me or would the colors hide? " i love it.!! Blessings Forever Follow You..T-7 (10+ )

    sunshine16701

    11/24/2009

    thank you so mmuch..ive always wondered what others thought of my poems..only ever shared them with my family

    Beetle726 commented on Inside A Rainbow

    11-23-2009

    How nice that would be. I liked this very much. You have great vision and a woderfully beautiful imagination that you put to ink very well. Nicely done.

    sunshine16701

    11/23/2009

    thank you...thats nice to hear

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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