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    In the midst of livin I went down and when night-fall calls I hear the sounds . the sizzle and the fizzle of the world goin round assaults my emotions and I want to be found kind and sharing what I find, like pieces of my mind
    I want to look with wonder at a cloud both my feet against the ground feelin hot from the sun and I'm meltin inside from wantin some when the air weighs a ton and seems to surround all my senses with a dare to care and excavate the rare, no matter where
    In the deep and the loud of a crowd I'm silent as I peek inside to find what cannot hide . a delicate slice of good and all the ways I could do what I should while the world spins round furious and fast and I miss the moment that passed like a lifetime drowned in the midst of livin, of sometimes givin it up to you

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    keithrberryjr commented on interior

    02-21-2009

    great poem.nicely done

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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