invisible

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    invisible

    i put on a brave face
    i walk up to you
    i look into your eyes
    but still me you don't see
    i smile at you
    hide the fact that I'm blue
    you face away
    and go back where you lay
    i want to scream at you
    "look at me, I'm right here"
    but i don't coz i know
    no difference will it make
    it's me you forsake
    but it's a big mistake
    for one day
    you'll appreciate
    but by then
    it'll be too late.

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    Paradice21 commented on invisible

    12-17-2008

    I like damage goods and expressions of love but so far this is my favorite. I will read some more of your work later.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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