Ironic

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    • forbiddenlove
    • No matter how hard I try to let him go, his grasp on my heart is too tight!

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    Not my best by far......but truly is from my heart.  Hope you enjoy.

    Ironic

     I have a man whom I cannot love,
    I feel my love he is unworthy of.
    I used to love him with all my heart,
    Now I feel we'd be better off apart.
    I do not know if he'd ever let me go,
    One day I will try....this I know.

    Now with that being said....I cannot have the man whom I love,
    This is the man that my love he is deserving of.
    We were brought together by chance,
    And it that meeting found a special romance.
    Wishing many times that it was I he had wed,
    Yearning to be the one with whom he shares his bed.

    Ironic I guess you could say:
    I have a man whom I cannot love,
    Yet love a man whom I cannot have.

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    PoetChik commented on Ironic

    08-23-2011

    Great poem!! I know exactly how you feel... I Know in my case he will never let me go. So I live my life the same as you. Love is Cruel.
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    Tempy commented on Ironic

    10-18-2009

    I enjoyed your poem. it was a great read and I imagine a great write. ~! I hope your situation improves somehow
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    jademelissa74 commented on Ironic

    08-31-2009

    This poem reveals so much frustration from loving passionately with heavy restrains. Love is never meant to be chained to a pillar of salt. The reader can truly appreciate the sensitivity of the piece. At face value, it is heart-breaking. May your heart be freed from all burdens. I've enjoyed the poem. God bless.
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    forbiddenlove

    09/02/2009

    AHHH....I always look forward to your comments. They always seem to enlighten me. Thank you

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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