It is just not happening

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    I have hopes just as everybody else does.

    It is just not happening
    I've always thought that life was just not real enough for me.
    I thought that there must be more fantasy to life.
    When I discovered that this is as real as life is going to get and that there is no fantasy to life, I was torn apart.
    Now, for me the closest thing that I can get to as a fantasy is dreaming.
    Now I know that what i was hoping for just isn't going to happen.

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    bforibus commented on It is just not happening

    02-07-2010

    this poem, although without rhyme, has such a beautiful simple melody. the story behind it, is o so good and i am familiar with the emotion, o so well. great job on this one
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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