It's me tell me what you think

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    It's me tell me what you think

    theres a way to look at life
    and a way to live it,
    theres a way to say thanx
    and a way give it,
     i read this one day on the way to the bus stop
    and then i looked up and i can feel my heart stop
    there she was standin there just like before and all of a sudden the memories came back to me once more i thought she moved away and id never see her again but there she was standin with her best friend it was like i couldnt breathe my friend said wats wrong i said im cool well miss the bus if we take to long so after school im in my bed lookin at the wall at a picture of me and her and i can hear her call my name in my head so i think im goin crazy then someone said its true love for ya baby so now i cant sleep cause im thinkin about her mostly thinkin about wat im gona do with out her so at the next day of school im feeling so down then i lift my head and look around soas im lookin and watching the kids walk by and she walks up behind me touches my shoulder and says hi

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    MrChristian commented on It's me tell me what you think

    08-30-2009

    Your poem is beautiful and very on point but what kind of throws it off is that I can't feel your emotion behind it. But wonderful none the less keep writin'.

    Connie90

    10/28/2009

    theres no emotions i just sat down and wrote it

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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