Jealousy

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    • rachelleann28
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    Jealousy

    She sits back at home, wishing he was hers again.
    But nothing seems to be going her way anymore.
    When he left, he took everything she ever had.
    Now she's  left with nothing but a broken heart.
    All she ever did was give him what he wanted,
    so why did he leave with nothing left to say.
    She thought everything would go back to normal,
    but instead, everything went downhill.
    Her life was falling apart.
    She would try her hardest to hide her pain,
    but sometimes it just came out with no warning.
    Everyones knows there is something wrong and
    that she wont tell them, but only cause she has no idea
    how to explain.
    Its more of a "have to happen to you to understand" kinda thing.
    If she knew how to explain it, she would, but she dont, so she cant.
    Most people now adays just  dont ask.
    Every love song that she hears, she cries, cause she thinks about him.
    When she sees or hears about this wonderful guy that gave his own life for
    his girl, she cries. She wishes that he would do that for her, but he cant,
    cause he blew his chance with her.
    He threw her out like she was a bone.
    Alot of guys want her, but she only wants him, the one that clamed to love
    her with all his heart, but yet distroyed her whole future with him.
    She thought he was perfect and that he would never leave her, but
    she was wrong.
    He was always sweet to her and never hurt her, until one day, just out of
    the blue, he told her it was over.
    She didnt know what to do, she just wanted to end the pain, and kill herself,
    cause it was the only other thing she knew to do to get over him.
    He said it was not her and that she did nothing wrong, but how come she
    felt so sorry for her self, and he wouldnt talk to her.
    She just knew it was all because of that one little mistake, that was not even
    her fault, but he must have took it has it was.
    She will never forget him, for as long as she lives.
    She wants him back all to her self, like it use to be.
    She want there to be an "us" instead of just a friendship.
    When she sees him with other girls, and he is laughing and smiling, she
    remembers the times when she was the only one that could do that.
    She gets this big pain in her heart, that makes it skip a beat, and she
    startes to cry, all because of this little thing called jealousy.

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    supermancdr commented on Jealousy

    09-03-2009

    wow i really feel foe you on this one...i had a similiar situation happen wit me and it still kills me when i see them talkin to someone else. it never goes away but in time it gets easiar. keep on writing and keep on checking out my page i got a lot of new stuff comin in the next two days. let me kno what u think good or bad.

    rachelleann28

    09/03/2009

    thanks for the comment!!! I will sure be reading them!! your stuff is great!!! I'm sure it will be great lol!!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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