Just You

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    this is about an ex from a few months ago...this promise i made to her...who knew she'd be the one to break me...aye..

    Just You

    do u kno all the things you do to me?
    the butterflies, heart flutters whenever i talk to u
    did u kno that ure all i want and need?
    did u kno that u are the cause for my need to smile
    the reason i am smiling for no reason at all?

    i crave ur touch, ur lips on mine, ur body close to me
    i want to show you just how much u mean to me
    spoil you like i want to, hold the doors open for you
    buy you flowers just cuz i can, do romantic things for you

    just to see that smile spread across ur face
    knowing that im the one that caused it,
    that im the reason for ur smile
    the smile that i fell in the with in the first place,
    to be able to look into ur eyes
    and just get lost in them, just you and me baby
    no one else in the picture

    i can see myself with you for a long time, it just feels natural
    u remember that? remember saying that,
    do you remember telling me that
    just talking to me feels natural? i remember,
    i remembered every word
    i hope to make you and me baby last a long while

    u are different from the rest, u stand out from the rest
    u are the only one for me, the only one i want to give my all to
    i cant think of anybody better,
    i dont think anyone can stand against you
    everyone would lose, u would always come out on top, always will

    you and me it just sounds so natural
    like second nature to me, like it was meant to be
    you and me baby are gonna last a long while i can just feel it
    feel it in my heart, i wont let nothing happen to us
    nothing will ever get between us, that i promise you

    i promise never to let you go, this i promise
    i promise never to hurt you in any way, this i promise
    i promise to never walk away from you, this i promise
    i promise to always be understanding, this i promise
    i promise that im never going anywhere, this i promise
    i promise that you can trust me, this i promise
    i promise to catch you when u fall, this i promise
    i never break my promises especially to someone as special as you are

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    graceladymn commented on Just You

    10-26-2009

    That's sweet, loving and kind, I hope she returns your love and that your days ahead are bright and filled with joy. You wrote directly from the heart and that makes this a really good piece on love. Thank you for sharing.

    Tempy commented on Just You

    10-18-2009

    I enjoyed your poem. it was a great read and I imagine a great write. ~!nice

    Uniqueness13

    10/25/2009

    thanks and yes it was :)

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