Keep it Green

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    Keep it Green

    Im just a lost cause, I have my flaws,
    Kind of like a VCR, with out the pause.
    I can't rewind my life, i can't advance ahead,
    Will i live to be 50? Or will i be dead?
    It seems that my life is always on play,
    A little triangle, just in the way,
    Of me relaxing, some time to myself,
    That green light's on and it's taking tolls on my health.
    And when all the troubles become too much all i can do is shout!
    And wish i could push stop and take the video out!
    But thats not the answer, the climax is near,
    Keep that video playing, year after year.

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    Chi commented on Keep it Green

    02-05-2009

    great inspiration to push on in spite of whatever. keep up the work of the goods. Chi.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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