Left Traces

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    Left Traces

    She starts to fall
    All walking is gone
    And with every fall
    A loud cry

    She cries out at night
    Waiting for someone to come
    But now she is all alone
    Buried in the ground

    There are still traces of her
    Locks of hair by the sink
    Worn clothing on the floor
    The memories that echoe and ring

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    BrittKun commented on Left Traces

    11-17-2009

    This is really good WOW!!!! But I feel sorry for the girl. Did She die? DID she get hurt ? How did she die? It sad did she get kill.

    CMarsh commented on Left Traces

    09-21-2009

    Very sad but strongly written, sometimes we can't choose our own ending and what we leave behind is never ending.

    1990lh commented on Left Traces

    07-31-2009

    i must used wow again i really like this one i loved the feel of the poem it dark sad almost creppy. we all have had these thought go through our mine at one time or another.

    StandingBear commented on Left Traces

    07-26-2009

    A well written work relating the sadness/loneliness of one that has passed. It sounds like she was alone even when she was alive. Great write.

    Platti commented on Left Traces

    07-07-2009

    Wow, reading Sylvia Plath again? (lol jk jk I love you =P) Very phenomenal poetry you have, I hope to read more form you! :D

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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