To let go

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    To let go

     To let go

    It was a strong stormy current,
    A heartless river dragging me away!

    First I fought against it
    But in a short time I realized
    That in order to win, I had to lose...

    And so I let myself go
    Pushing subliminally in an angle
    Until arriving at the other margin a mile later.
    Suddenly I grabbed  a broken tree branch
    Pushing myself to safety.

    I sat there at a rock
    Hearing the impartial waters
    And when I finally opened my eyes
    I smiled and thanked the heavens
    For such moment of bliss!

    Wanishi

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    LenaMP commented on To let go

    12-17-2009

    Great philosophy for life. You not only arrived safely but what a ride! Nicely though out and flows well.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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