~Letting You Know~

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    ~Letting You Know~

    If you decide to raise your hand,
    in the hospital you'll land.
    Before you decide to talk,
    you better be ready to walk.
    I don't have time for your silly antics,
    I could sit here and call you names.
    But at the end of the day nothing would change.
    You know where I be,
    you know where to find me.
    Yet and still you want to play with my emotions,
    but i refuse to give up all my devotion.
    You once was on a mission,
    but your mission has been canceled.
    I took the time out to fill you in,
    so don't take it for granted,
    instead this is something you should inhance every ounce of.

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    bernie commented on ~Letting You Know~

    08-08-2009

    I get what you are trying to say, I just wish you had given yourself a little more time to say it more effectively. Writting great poems consistently is much like baking a cake. If you take it out of the oven to soon it will still look like a cake but it will not taste like a cake. I like it, but I should be loving it.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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