Life is A little down

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    Life is A little down

    There is a point in life

    When you come to a day

    When everything seems right

    When everything is okay

    But everything can go bad at the drop of a pin

    When you have to change

    And find a new life to begin

    Well now times are hard

    Your confusion is growing

    Time seems to fight you

    With an illusion of slowing

    No one has advice to give you

    No one seems to care

    And to find an easy fix

    Is Surely rare

    But soon things will work out

    Things will be fine

    Then just like before

    There will come a time

    That point in life

    When you come to a day

    When everything works out

    When everything is okay

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    charlpntr commented on Life is A little down

    08-10-2009

    Excellent! Such a good poem and reflective. Pretty worldly for 18. Good job.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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