Life Takes It's Toll

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    Life Takes It's Toll

    I miss the time when boys had cooties and chased you you around attempting to hurt you.
    The time when it was embarrassing for everyone to know who you liked.
    When your biggest concern was who got the swings first at the park.
    When recess was the highlight of the day.

    At least you know what its like to feel the triumph of a broken down body on the verge of denial.

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    Artie commented on Life Takes It's Toll

    11-21-2009

    You ain't seen nothing yet - lol Nice write....

    lonewolf commented on Life Takes It's Toll

    04-27-2009

    i really liked this. broke back some old memories. nice job

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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